ALL- Audience Feedback of Sample

Audience Feeback


We put together a opening sequence for our music vid during last week which lasted approximately a minuet and will be uploaded very shortly. 
Below is our audience feedback : 

• Members of our class said we had zero camera movement so this could be improved in our re-shoot of performance
• We need to re-rip MP3 and re-lay audio track 
• We could start with a group shot and then individually introduce members of the band.
• For our mirror shot for the narrative, we could maybe play around with layering. 
• Opening scene is maybe a bit to long for the narrative so cut this down a little bit.
• Overall we need faster paced editing, maybe some jump cuts.
• Bed shot - Multilayering and fade Sophie out.
• Additional behind the scenes footage of the band. 
• Costumes more together, more white colours - white t-shirts etc, bringing the group together more by having them wear the similar things
• Simple Choreography for the boyband.
• Dont introduce boyband straight away.
• Dont need all of the shots of the main boy in narrative.
• More signifiers of relationship needed for the narrative in misc-en-scene.
• For the narrative we could have Car Keys - bottle of drink to signify guilt maybe? 
• Ducks and bread for a romantic scene in narrative.
• Do want some skin showing, not just buttoned up.

Over all we have taken this feedback into consideration and are organising a re-shoot.